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我目前的工作是測量.偶爾喜歡煮菜給女友吃.我的家庭共有 5個人.父親是當商人.母親當裁縫師.哥哥當監造.姐姐當老師.在這個家庭 每星期日都會有一個家庭聚會.就是晚上大家一起在家聚餐吃飯. 所以大家的感情都很好 工作….2.我目前在一家測量公司上班.我做測量這個行業已經有2年多了 .當兵之前是當廚師約半年.當兵期間也煮了一年.退伍後也從事 廚房半年.但我最大的興趣還是測量.因為非常有趣生動.我的經驗 有做過高鐵.捷運.海上測量.還有在台中港做水準測量.我們測量隊成員 總共有十三個人.分2組.一組是中鋼組.一組是捷運.還有2位劃圖人員 跟一位隊長跟老闆.所以工作非常的快樂 期望…在正修科技大學這四年的期間好好把學業充實好.並且把自己的 實力提升.目標測量.品管.勞安.autocad.證照.一併拿起來.在來面對最困難 的土木技師.並且好好養一個家生個小寶寶.工作穩定是必然的.面對任何 事都不能半途而廢.有了資金以後就要開一間火鍋店當做自己的興趣下 去經營.  x0
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2007-05-05 21:07 |
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Family …my son calls the XXX come from that Kaohsiung was born in XXXX-XX-XX me to go an alacrity
My current work is a diagraph.Occasionally like to cook vegetables to eat for girlfriend.My family has totally 5 persons.The father is businessman.The mother is tailor.The elder brother is Jian to build.The elder sister is a teacher.At this family Will there is a family party every Sundays.Is everyone in the evening together the dinner party has a meal at home. So everyone's affection is all very good. Work ….2.I go to work at a diagraph company currently.I do to have already measured this industry for more than 2 years .Before serving as soldier is be a cook to invite half year.Served as soldier a period to also cook for a year.Also work on after retiring from the army Half year of the kitchen.But my biggest interest still measure.Because very interesting vivid.My experience Did a high speed railway.Mass transit.The sea measures.The harbor that still has in Taichung does the level diagraph.We measure a team member There are 13 persons altogether.Divide into 2.The a set of is to win a steel set.The a set of is a mass transit.Still there are 2s to mark diagram a personnel Follow a captain and owner.So the work is very happy Expect …at period been fixing science and technology university for this four years good like like studies enrichment.And chase own of The strength promotes.The target measures.Quality control.Lao Anne.autocad.License.Pick up along together.At to face the most difficult Of civil engineer.And like like to keep a house to get a darling child.Working the stability is inevitable.Face any The matter can't do things by halves.Had a funds hereafter will open a chafing dish store to be considered as under own interest Conduct. 請問會英文比較強的可以來幫忙嗎?因為有人幫我翻的但是我覺得翻的意思有點問題請問有高手可以幫忙解嗎?先謝謝摟 x0
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2007-05-06 17:07 |
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傻眼 大大您結婚囉
my son calls............ 不是我的名字 怎麼變成 我兒子的名字 雖然我英文沒很好 但是整個翻譯起來 有些應該是用 線上翻譯機吧! 我想幫您 可是我自已英文又不好 您去知識+ 裡面有很多高手 最好 把你自已翻譯的 放上去 這樣 大家才會覺得 您有用心 不然有些大大會不理你的 x0
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70040128
2007-05-06 22:11 |
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這是我求雅虎知識用下來的!有人幫我翻的!但是句子確實很怪!雖然英文我不太懂!但我還是有慢慢去查去觀看!現在只缺東風而已!那個東西就是高手來幫忙!!謝謝大家來幫忙回覆!謝謝
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2007-05-08 22:26 |
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這個是用翻譯軟體翻的英文，實在是"殘不忍賭"。沒必要最好不要用，否則會有不良的後果。
最好先將中文改一下，不要將一些"烏黑某"搞進來。如果這是一篇自傳，最基本的先分段。 先嚐試自我寫一下，然後po上來，自然有人就會幫你稍略"巡試" 一下。 最近大家皆不願"雞婆"了，皆因打火兄弟來無影，去無蹤，又非常ungrateful!!  x0
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浩瀚的宇宙
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下面是引用Davis於2007-05-08 22:26發表的 : ........不是不願意雞婆 而是 小的真的英文沒很好 最近 我才在嘗試寫作 寫的真是零零落落 還有 您的工作 裡面的一些專有名詞 職業頭銜 我根本不知道 該怎麼翻譯  x0
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2007-05-14 19:24 |
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Family ... The names I called XXX from Kaohsiung XXXX-XX-XX I was born in the lively trip of my current work is measured volume. occasionally like to cook for my girlfriend eat. My family is a total of five individuals. When the father is businessman. When the mother tailor. When my brother supervision. sister as a teacher. In this family every Sunday will be a family gathering. Everyone is at home with dinner eat. So our feelings are good jobs ... . 2. I am currently in a measurement work. I do measurements in the industry have two more years. When a soldier before cooks About half a year. cook as soldiers during the year. Legionnaires after six months in the kitchen. However, my greatest interest is measured. Non - often lively and interesting manner. My experience has been the high-speed railway. MRT. surface. Taichung Harbor have done in the standard of measurement. We measurement Team members of a total of 13 individuals. divided into 2 groups. is a group of steel group. MRT is a group. there are two plans is a team with staff long with the boss. So very happy expect ... Amendment of the University of Science and Technology is the four years of this period to put good academic enrichment. and the strength of their upgrade. objective measurement. quality control . Lao An. autocad. license. take up together. in the most difficult to face civil technician. and a good support home birth to small babies. Working stability is inevitable. face anything can valueless. With funds is about a future Hot Pot Restaurant between them as their interest to operate under.
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2007-05-19 01:40 |
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occasionally like to cook for my girlfriend eat
經常要把女朋友"煮"來吃?? ? oh!!That's great.  x0
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2007-05-22 23:50 |
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My name is xxx. I was born in Kaohsiung Country in 1981. My individuality is active and extroverted. I am an architectural interior surveyor. I always like to cook some delicious foods with my family and girlfriend in my free time. There are five people in my family. My father is a businessman. He is conscientious about his job in one sense, and I was affected by my father. My mother is a dressmaker. She is good at making any kinds of good dresses. I have an older brother, who is a tindal. My older sister is a teacher, who works in a cram school. We always have a family reunion and eat at home every Sunday. I am very fortunate to have grown up in a harmonious family.
I used to be a chef for half a year before I joined the army. During the soldiering, I did some cook service for the other soldiers for almost one year. When I demobilized, I was still being a chef for half a year. However, it is not my favorite job. I found my interesting is architectural interior survey engineering. It is more divertive than cooking. I have been working in an architectural interior design company for two years. That̉̉ s why I am attractive by architectural interior survey engineering at present. As an architectural interior surveyor, I have a lot of practical survey experiences. For instance, some survey assignments in High- speed railway, Rapid transit and at sea survey. I used to do a level survey in Taichung Harbor. There were thirteen clansmen in our survey team. We separated it into two groups. One was Chinese Steel team, and the other one was Rapid transit team. There was also a headman who would boss our team about and two cartographers who drew some charts for us. This was a special and unforgettable experience for me. My formal major is Architectural at Cheng Shiu University now. During the four years, I will focus on academically study. It is now my aim to advance my professional knowledge in quality control, excel and autocad. I also plan to get the architectural interior survey license as soon as possible. It must be an arduous task for me but I will affront it. I think to be an architectural interior survey engineer will not be a dream for me. After graduated, I plan to get a stable architectural interior survey job. I will get married with my girlfriend. We plan to have a baby. It is important for me to get enough money to keep my family. If I get plenty bankroll I will invest a chafing dish restaurant. Because having a chafing dish restaurant is my second dream. I'm confident about being successful in the future. I will face those challenges and won't abandon anything bad in my life. 謝謝大家的用心喔!經過我的努力與奮鬥我終於寫好了!謝謝大家喔!  x0
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2007-05-23 16:14 |
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大部份寫的不錯，除了少許地方可以修改一下，會更好。
I always like to cook some delicious foods with my family and girlfriend in my free time →→ I always like to cook some delicious food for my family and girlfriend in my spare time.(這句中文之意就是閒暇之餘，我為家人與女友整上一桌讓大家大塊朵頤一番。而上一句是有空 之時，與大家整上一桌，共享盛宴，與你的原文不同) He is conscientious about his job in one sense →→中文：在某種意義上而言，他工作負責盡職。易言之，有時盡責，有時可能??  改為→→He is conscientious about his work devotedly(或是single-mindedly) 或是→→He is conscientious about his work with all his might.(傾全力努力工作) and at sea survey →→and at-sea survey 或是 and sea survey I used to do level survey(水準測量) →→leveling survey There were thirteen clansmen in our survey team →→There were 13 associates (members)in our survey team . clansmen是表示家庭成員或是家族成員，如按上面的寫法就表示這13人皆有親戚關係。 This was a special and unforgettable experience for me →→This is a special and unforgettable experience for me.現在式比較符合情境 It is now my aim to advance my professional knowledge in quality control, excel and autocad →→It is now my aim to advance my professional skills in quality control, labour security, autocad training, and working licence. I think to be an architectural interior survey engineer will not be a dream for me →→I don't think it will be a dream (for me) to be an architectural interior survey engineer. If I get plenty bankroll I →→If I got plenty of bankroll, I would．．． Because having a chafing dish restaurant is my second dream →→To have(run) a chafing dish restaurant is my second dream.表示未來的願望，不能用動名詞來 當主詞。 I'm confident about being successful in the future →→I'm confident in my future life.或是 →→I'm confident of doing well in the future. won't abandon anything bad in my life →→中文之意：不會放棄我生命中任何的壞事 →→won't abandon my sweet dream in my life.  x0
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